Maura Stanton
Maura
Stantons first book of poetry, Snow On Snow, was selected by Stanley Kunitz for the Yale
Series of Younger Poets Award, and published in 1975.
She has also published Cries of
Swimmers (
Looking for the Shine
Down in
When I saw an article about this park in a recent issue of Home & Away (July/Aug 2006) I stopped thumbing
the pages and began to read. The advice from
Don Mayes, a man who has found 270 diamonds over the last 27 years. was simple and
straightforward, and made me think immediately of writing poetry.
Look for the shine.
Once I have a bunch of words on a page, a few images, some sounds, a sketchy notion of a
subject, Im in the same position as a diamond hunter.
I have to sift through the piles looking for something that glitters,
something that catches my eye and makes my heart beat.
When I spot it, or think I spot it, Ive just begun.
Ive got to wash away all the dirt and obscurity until I get down to
the solid lump and begin to work on it, cleaning, cutting, and polishing. I dont know how many carets its going
to be until Im finished, or whether it will be a sparkly blue-white diamond, a pale
topaz-brown diamond or a vivid lemon-yellow diamond. It
might crumble into a clod of dirt, or I might end up with something marvelous.
The regular diamond hunters enjoy the hunt for the diamonds as much as they do making a
find. They like the diamonds for their beauty
and elegance. Theres a picture of Don Mayes in the article displaying a case of
diamonds. He finds an average of two diamonds
a year.
Two diamonds a year! Thats a comforting
number. I write perhaps 10 to 20 poems a year,
depending on length (and depending on a million other factors) so if 2 poems a year turn
out to be as hard and elegant and perfect as diamonds, I can allow myself to be happy.
But I wont find those two diamond-like poems unless I keep on looking for the shine,
sifting, washing, weighing, and cutting. Ive
got to be patient, and when it turns out, as it often does, that the shine in my pan is
only an agate or a nugget of fools gold, Ive got to pull on my mud-stained jeans and
go back out there and get to work, just like Diamond Jim Archer, another
regular diamond hunter who dug in the park every day until he died on the field with
his boots on.